I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 27 September 2018
T3w10 writing
this week I have been writing and practicing capital letters and full stops. I have made a book on google slides to write a story please have a look and please leave a comment about my writing.
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Zoe!
ReplyDeleteWhat an interesting and magical story you have written! Ka pai! I really liked the detail you have put in and the colourful backgrounds and fonts were beautiful. Next time, maybe you could put a little bit of the story on each page and have a matching picture?
From Miss W
Hi! Zoe
ReplyDeleteI love your writing about a mermaid maybe you could make some to make some photos to match you story .
You are a great writer
From Angel-mey
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ReplyDeleteki-ore Zoe,
ReplyDeleteTakira here you have nice things on your blog and a nice litter:)