We Where learning to make thoghtfull Comment.
We made posters to share what we learnt with you.
when we made a poster we had to write words and insert picturs. We also had to make sure it was colourful and easy to read.
Hope you like my poster!
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. In 2021 I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Miss Rennell. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 27 May 2019
9 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hey Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI really like your poster. The pictures you have chosen match what you are trying to say and your words are big enough to read. I wonder if the yellow may be a bit too bright as that one is the hardest to read. What do you think? Do you like getting a comment on your blog?
- Miss Morgan
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ReplyDeleteTena koe Zoe.It is really cool that you have been learning how to make a good comment. I like that you know that you need to have a greeting and it needs to be positive thoughtful and helpful. Maybe you could make an animation about it. From Alex!
ReplyDeleteBula Zoe
ReplyDeleteI really liked your blog post of how to make a comment it would really help people that do not know how to make a comment. Like year 3s and people how will be going in this class next year.
What was you favourte part about cybercmart?
Can’t wait for your next post Angel-Mey :)
Hi Zoe I really enjoyed that post because you have put some very cool faxes of how to make a positive thoughtful and helpful comment. Maybe next time you could show us a comment. What is your favorite thing to do in cybersmart? From Stella.
ReplyDeleteHi Zoe your poster looks really really cool I like how you used pretty colours . Do you like your poster ? Bye
ReplyDeleteFrom Zara Tie
Hi Zoe
ReplyDeleteI like your how to make a comment it's really cool but maybe you could change the yellow on postive bye Ava
Hi Ava
DeleteThanks for the comment. Maybe i could cange it next time.
Can,t wait to see more of your post.
From Zoe!
Hi zoe
ReplyDeleteI like how you maked it by greeting to people its really cool but maybe you can put some more colours in it but it is cool.
from kaisa.