This week we have been writing a letter to one place that we went to the school holidays.
Here is my writing I hope you like it.
495 Brougham Street,
Opawa
Christchurch 802
15.10.18
Dear Alpine Ice
I came to ice skating with my friend Angel-mey during the school holidays. I like to ice skate because I like to go fast. I think that you are the best ice skating place in the world.
I like to skate to the music and I like to go fast. I like when you put the disco light on because when you put the lights on it looks cool. I like when you can get in a spot and the staff members spin the bottle. When you get people to get off the ice so if they go slow they won't get ran over. I enjoy going fast and skating to the music when you can pick a song to get played when you are skating around but the ice is really cold if you land on your bottom.
From Zoe
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