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Friday 24 April 2020

Shared Story Native animal.

Hello , today i am going to tell you about kiwis.  This week i had to make a slide about a native animal and i picked a Kiwi for NZ.


Here is my Info.



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2 comments:

  1. Angela Taylor24 April 2020 at 13:07

    Well done Zoe! This is a very clear poster with some great information about kiwis. I can see you enjoyed learning about them. What did you learn that surprised you the most?

    Mrs Taylor :)

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  2. Mia21 May 2020 at 13:45

    Hi Zoe! My name is Mia and I am from Rimu Class. Awesome work! I liked your google drawing, it was really eye-catching and you had some great information in there.

    I did not know that they have big eggs! I would expect to them to be small, because kiwi's themselves are quite small. What is your favorite thing about the kiwi?

    To improve, make sure to re-read your writing, there are few sentences that are missing some bits in it.

    Great job!
    Mia

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